Excellent book if you like well thought out mech combat. This novel also avoids the classic trap of the academy arc going on forever with the main character(s) getting into action early unlike others where there are hundreds of chapters with the MC as a child that does basically nothing. The descriptions of the battles, the tactics, and overall action sequences are phenomenal. I binged the entire current library to 125 chapters overnight having to go to work without sleeping.One thing I would like from the author is a little bit more active almost info dumping. Pretty much nothing is known about the universe until it is plot relevant. New races or kingdoms get mentioned when something big happens, but you do not know how it all fits together. In the author's other novel, they introduce the other continents before the MC visits them which, for me, made the world overall seem more alive.Overall, read it, you will not regret it. Thank you for writing an amazing mech novel!
Hello Fellow Daoist! If you're new, I'm sure you're here in the Review Section to see if the story is actually worth reading, right? Honestly though, the early chapters are really crappy especially Chapters between 1 and 20 or maybe even more. Why? Well, I created this just for fun so I never really had a plot prepared when I started writing this so I just wrote what ever ideas that pops out in my mind. What I didn't expect is that I would actually get a contract for it because you know~..the story was just out of a hobby, right? So to those new readers out there, if you could at least get past maybe around chapter 30 or 40? I could at least tell you that the story slowly gets better and better. After all, I'm just a noob writer with almost no experience in writing novels. And if you read past those chapters that I mentioned above but you think that story is still the same like it didn't even have a change? Then maybe it isn't your cup of tea after all, sorry. Anyway, best of luck to us! ^_^ Peace! / NOTE: For the last time! It was clearly mentioned that weapons bought from the [System] or weapons created after the purging are the only usable weapons and weapons after WWII is a no no. NOTE TWO: You would only comment about modern weapons being a plot hole if you just skimmed or didn't even read the early chapters at all.Important Note: I will delete reviews that just rants about the story flow in the early chapters because it didn't go what they wanted it.Please leave reviews with constructed criticism that points out mistakes in the story where it needs improvement.Keep in mind that the story was only written as hobby before it was contracted, so I just wrote whatever comes to my mind.P.S the Stronghold needed to be built in a place indicated by the [System] on his map, it can't be just built anywhere the MC wanted. God, I'm tired of explaining ****! Just read the fucking whole chapters from 1 to 10, all of it was explained there! So stop being a brat and write your own if the story doesn't go the way you wanted it!
I would give 5/5. The characters seems to have life and i could imagine all that happened in that prologue. I would like to give the author all the best for upcoming chapters.
good novel!! 4 of my favourite tags although the world background is not that good, it is average and the mc is one of my favourite types so please dont drop this gem and keep countinuing it!also the writing quality is awesome too
Year xxxx In the district of kawfey in this district there was a Big Shopping Mall and there's too many people who got in the line to buy a new visual reality video game and there's a young man who is in the line to queue too buy this so called new visual reality video game and that is our MC the name is Johnny Shi while our Mc trying too queue Johnny Shi rival the name is ouyang xue.... . hmmm... hey little dog Shi
With the death of my father, I would have to support the house since I had a mind full of ideas that could generate a lot of income and let my mother live comfortably.
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